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I wrote the introduction script for the show im writing!


#1

Here it is if anyone wants to read ot! If you just found this and didnt see my other post here is the forum! So I Have A TV Animation Show Idea

Anyways heres the small beginning script! Ill be writing more tomorrow! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Otncradt23D-WbrByAed1JUAqhkqKqyEyfITB5HRLgQ/edit?usp=sharing

Tell me your honest opinions, ill love to hear them!


#2

very good j-man


#3

I like it :+1:


#4

Changed to #promote-yourself

I will admit that at first, the story seemed like a cheesy Wattpad fanfic, however it became intriguing as the chapter went on.

Is this your first script? If so, not bad! (considering the very little experience, of course)


#5

It was really good // just the small typos :heart::ok_hand:


#6

Yes its my first times writing one but thank you so much!!! Ill be writing more of it tonight :slight_smile:


#7

hoorah yess


#8

You should get someone to proofread your script to avoid mistakes and typos :grinning:


#9

Will do! Thank you :slight_smile:


#10

Im going to fix them today, i was typing on my laptop and i cant for somereason left click on the pad, so rip. Thank you!


#11

It’s cool! I’d totally watch it. And i’m already intrigued by the princess…


#12

Shes definitely one of my favorite characters ive written so far! Ill go into detail about her personality when shes introduced for you if you want me to!


#13

Sick! :metal:t5: Keep up the good work


#14

interesting, looks good i gave your other thread So I Have A TV Animation Show Idea a read too, looks really promising.